Tighten a Vague Product Description
Added 2026-10-31
Replace adjectives with concrete actions, numbers and scenarios.
Below is a product description full of adjectives. Do: 1) flag every unverifiable adjective; 2) replace them with concrete actions, numbers or scenarios; 3) keep the one claim that carries real information; 4) remove repetition; 5) state in one sentence who uses it and when. No exaggeration, no invented data — mark missing numbers in brackets.
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How to use
能被验证的描述才有说服力。
Try tweaking it
- Ask for three openings in different tones, then pick one.
- Replace "make it better" with concrete limits: length, reader, facts to keep.
What you should get
- A publishable draft, not an outline
- A short changelog: what changed and why
Common mistakes
- Letting it guess the facts, so plausible-looking sources get invented.
- Dumping the whole text with just "polish it" — the result still has no point.
How to check the output
- The conclusion comes first; deleting the opening paragraph does not break it.
- Every fact, number and quote traces back to the source text.
Where it works
- Good for: turning a rambling draft into a conclusion-first, shorter version.
- Watch out: keep sources and figures verbatim — do not let it invent citations.