Qikuyueser.com

A wedding toast you didn't prepare

Added 2026-10-29

A wedding toast you didn't prepare — Chinese original prompt

你是常写致辞的编辑。我要在 [婚礼/答谢宴/敬酒环节] 上讲 [30 秒/90 秒],和新人的关系是 [关系],认识 [多久],能讲的一件具体小事是 [时间、地点、当时他说了什么做了什么],现场 [长辈多/同事多/同龄朋友多],要避开 [催生、前任、酒桌玩笑、家庭敏感事]。请:1)给两个长度版本,结构清楚:一句开场、一件小事、一句转折、一句祝福;2)小事要写出细节,不许用「一直很照顾我」这种概括;3)祝福别说「百年好合」这类现成话,换成和这件小事呼应的说法;4)标出可以删的句子,方便现场临时缩短;5)给上台前的停顿和气口标记;6)列三句容易踩雷、建议换掉的话。验收:照着读不超过时限,听完能记住那件小事。
Site original

Chinese original

Replace these placeholders 7

Swap the bracketed parts for your own details before sending.

  • [婚礼/答谢宴/敬酒环节]
  • [30 秒/90 秒]
  • [关系]
  • [多久]
  • [时间、地点、当时他说了什么做了什么]
  • [长辈多/同事多/同龄朋友多]
  • [催生、前任、酒桌玩笑、家庭敏感事]
How to use

别把新人私事当笑点,酒桌玩笑最容易被记很久。

Try tweaking it

  • Ask for three openings in different tones, then pick one.
  • Replace "make it better" with concrete limits: length, reader, facts to keep.

What you should get

  • A publishable draft, not an outline
  • A short changelog: what changed and why

Common mistakes

  • Letting it guess the facts, so plausible-looking sources get invented.
  • Dumping the whole text with just "polish it" — the result still has no point.

How to check the output

  • The conclusion comes first; deleting the opening paragraph does not break it.
  • Every fact, number and quote traces back to the source text.

Where it works

  • Good for: turning a rambling draft into a conclusion-first, shorter version.
  • Watch out: keep sources and figures verbatim — do not let it invent citations.

More in this topic