Rewrite a Jargon-Heavy Sentence
Added 2026-11-02
Keep the precise meaning, replace the words only insiders understand.
Here is a jargon-heavy sentence. Do: 1) split it into two or three plain sentences; 2) mark which terms are necessary proper nouns and which are just insider words; 3) propose common alternatives for the insider words without losing accuracy; 4) point out one place the original could be misread; 5) give a version you would say to a non-specialist colleague. Do not trade accuracy for simplicity.
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How to use
行话不是专业，是偷懒。
Try tweaking it
- Ask for three openings in different tones, then pick one.
- Replace "make it better" with concrete limits: length, reader, facts to keep.
What you should get
- A publishable draft, not an outline
- A short changelog: what changed and why
Common mistakes
- Letting it guess the facts, so plausible-looking sources get invented.
- Dumping the whole text with just "polish it" — the result still has no point.
How to check the output
- The conclusion comes first; deleting the opening paragraph does not break it.
- Every fact, number and quote traces back to the source text.
Where it works
- Good for: turning a rambling draft into a conclusion-first, shorter version.
- Watch out: keep sources and figures verbatim — do not let it invent citations.